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May 31

We are blest like the rest

Posted on Monday, May 31, 2010 in Incorrect word usage

Is blest a misspelling of blessed?

That depends.
According to Merriam-Webster’s Online Dictionary it is an alternative.
According to Wiktionary, it is archaic.

To be safe, use blessed.

May 30

One would think

Posted on Sunday, May 30, 2010 in Misused words and expressions

Would

A conditional statement in the first person requires should, not would.
I should not have succeeded without his help.

The equivalent of shall in indirect quotation after a verb in the past tense is should, not would.
He predicted that before long we should have a great surprise.

To express habitual or repeated action, the past tense, without would, is usually sufficient, and from its brevity, more emphatic.
Poor: Once a year he would visit the old mansion.
Better: Once a year he visited the old mansion.

From: William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style, 1918.

May 29

Is it worth it?

Posted on Saturday, May 29, 2010 in Misused words and expressions

Worth while

Overworked as a term of vague approval and (with not) of disapproval. Strictly applicable only to actions: “Is it worth while to telegraph?”

Poor: His books are not worth while.
Better: His books are not worth reading (not worth one’s while to read; do not repay reading).

The use of worth while before a noun (“a worth while story”) is indefensible. 

From: William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style, 1918.

May 28

Who he said was late

Posted on Friday, May 28, 2010 in Misused words and expressions

Whom

Often incorrectly used for who before he said or similar expressions, when it is really the subject of a following verb.

Poor: His brother, whom he said would send him the money.
Better: His brother, who he said would send him the money.

Poor: The man whom he thought was his friend.
Better: The man who (that) he thought was his friend (whom he thought his friend).

From: William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style, 1918.

May 27

While means during the time that

Posted on Thursday, May 27, 2010 in Misused words and expressions

While

Poor: While the temperature reaches 90 or 95 degrees in the daytime, the nights are often chilly.
Better: Although the temperature reaches 90 or 95 degrees in the daytime, the nights are often chilly.

The paraphrase,
The temperature reaches 90 or 95 degrees in the daytime; at the same time the nights are often chilly,
shows why the use of while is incorrect.

In general, the writer will do well to use while only with strict literalness, in the sense of during the time that.

From: William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style, 1918.

May 26

While replacing although

Posted on Wednesday, May 26, 2010 in Misused words and expressions

While

Its use as a virtual equivalent of although is allowable in sentences where this leads to no ambiguity or absurdity.

While I admire his energy, I wish it were employed in a better cause.
This is entirely correct, as shown by the paraphrase,
I admire his energy; at the same time I wish it were employed in a better cause.

 From: William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style, 1918.

May 25

While replacing and, but or although

Posted on Tuesday, May 25, 2010 in Misused words and expressions

While

Avoid the indiscriminate use of this word for and, but, and although. Many writers use it frequently as a substitute for and or but, either from a mere desire to vary the connective, or from uncertainty which of the two connectives is the more appropriate. In this use it is best replaced by a semicolon.

Poor: The office and salesrooms are on the ground floor, while the rest of the building is devoted to manufacturing.
Better: The office and salesrooms are on the ground floor; the rest of the building is devoted to manufacturing.

From: William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style, 1918.

May 24

Point of view

Posted on Monday, May 24, 2010 in Misused words and expressions

Very

Use this word sparingly. Where emphasis is necessary, use words strong in themselves.

Viewpoint

Write point of view, but do not misuse this, as many do, for view or opinion.

From: William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style, 1918.

May 23

They are always to blame

Posted on Sunday, May 23, 2010 in Misused words and expressions

They

A common inaccuracy is the use of the plural pronoun when the antecedent is a distributive expression such as each, each one, everybody, every one, many a man, which, though implying more than one person, requires the pronoun to be in the singular. Similar to this, but with even less justification, is the use of the plural pronoun with the antecedent anybody, any one, somebody, some one, the intention being either to avoid the awkward “he or she,” or to avoid committing oneself to either. Some bashful speakers even say, “A friend of mine told me that they, etc.”

Use he with all the above words, unless the antecedent is or must be feminine.

From: William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style, 1918.

May 22

Thanks shortcut

Posted on Saturday, May 22, 2010 in Misused words and expressions

Thanking you in advance

 This sounds as if the writer meant, “It will not be worth my while to write to you again.” Simply write, “Thanking you,” and if the favor which you have requested is granted, write a letter of acknowledgment.

From: William Strunk, Jr., The Elements of Style, 1918.